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I will slough off
all my feelings for you
like a second skin
for somebody else
to slip into
why am I still not over this
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ErinM31 Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2013
I love your poems, elegant, precise use of words and clear imagery,
but most of all
it is the feelings that mirror the shadows that dwell also in me
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:icontoxic-nebulae:
toxic-nebulae Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2013  Student Writer
<3 thank you!
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exquisiteoath Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2013  Student General Artist
Sadly, the only answer for that is because it's not time yet. Relationships end as they are wont to end. I mourned the death of my first relationship for two years.

That being said, I am oh so very happy now with the woman I share my life with, so it's possible (and even likely) that things will get better. Though, I make no promises.
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:icontoxic-nebulae:
toxic-nebulae Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2013  Student Writer
:heart: it's getting better every day.
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:iconexquisiteoath:
exquisiteoath Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2013  Student General Artist
This is excellent news. :D
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Nullibicity Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
this. blew. me. away.

Small poems like this have always drawn the highest admiration from me: They take a lot of careful selection and a lot of raw emotion, usually. This, to me, was just beautiful. I really have no words, and I think that's what's most disappointing.
Bravo. You are very talented :rose:
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:icontoxic-nebulae:
toxic-nebulae Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2013  Student Writer
:blush: wow, thank you!
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:iconnullibicity:
Nullibicity Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You are most certainly welcome :heart:
It was entirely my pleasure~
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brokenfragilethings Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I know the feeling. It sort of sits in the back of your throat.

This is beautifully relatable, and wonderfully written. I like the diction and formatting.

Lovely piece.
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:icontoxic-nebulae:
toxic-nebulae Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013  Student Writer
:heart: thank you!
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