Mhmm - I love this one too. The absolute possession as I would put it - taking each and everything and making it yours... It is interesting that you ask in the end if you can call them yours You don't ask whether you can MAKE them yours... Over all a short and clever work!
I like this. Nit... The comma use on the fourth line is a distraction--or--ask yourself What's it suppose to add for a reader? Timing issues could be achieved with more traditional punctuation, with less confusion.