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I am in love with you
in the way that children
are in love:
incompletely, sporadically,
self-consciously.

you appear to me
as every adult appears
to a child:
faultless, omniscient,
unendingly generous and honest
and kind.

and, as must happen
to every child,
I will lose my god:
the slightest human error
will cause you to
fall
how extremely lazy of me
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PolkaDottedCoffeeMug Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2014  Student General Artist
This is such a wonderful poem! Even though it wasn't very long, it was powerful and I loved it! Anna squee 
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toxic-nebulae Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2014  Student Writer
:heart:
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killzonekrissy Featured By Owner May 25, 2014
Wow....  this is phenomenal! ... I have few words or feedback that would do this justice. This has left me pretty speechless.
But I have to say putting people on pedestals and falling in love does little else but disappoint.
you captured growing up (in love or in anything) perfectly!
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toxic-nebulae Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Student Writer
thank you.
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Blaise-Katzchen Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2013  Student General Artist
*tear rolls down cheek* .. literally. 

This reminds me of a certain lady whom i have lost many of my tears over. 

It is a very lovely poem though. :) 

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toxic-nebulae Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2013  Student Writer
:heart:
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dreamsinstatic Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2013
Your fantastic work has been featured in Friday Night Features.
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toxic-nebulae Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2013  Student Writer
thank you!
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scatteredwords Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I haven't been able to remove this one from my messages because I have such fondness for it. :heart:
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toxic-nebulae Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013  Student Writer
:blush:
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