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you shouldn’t love me anymore,
I think
I am made up of mostly empty space
I am mostly made up
I am like the universe
in that I am constantly expanding
faster and faster
and maybe no two parts of me will ever meet
maybe I’ll tear everything within me
apart
maybe I'll tear you apart
too
I think
I am made up of mostly empty space
I am mostly made up
I am like the universe
in that I am constantly expanding
faster and faster
and maybe no two parts of me will ever meet
maybe I’ll tear everything within me
apart
maybe I'll tear you apart
too
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I like it, especially the word rearrangement in the first two lines of the second stanza "I am made up of mostly empty space, I am mostly made up"
Brilliant!
Brilliant!