I really like the idea for this one, but I have a couple of misgivings: first of all, I sort of switched from the "souvenir" theme to the "France" theme when I didn't qualify that the Arc de Triomphe was a picture or a miniature or some other keepsake. Was this obvious? Is it a seamless transition, or should I rewrite that bit?
Also, are the line breaks effective in establishing rhythm and keeping the poem interesting, or are they distracting?
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